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Showing posts with label Songwriting. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Songwriting. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 1, 2013

Object Writing - Ding

The word "ding", unedited writing practice, 10 minutes, go!...

Ouch! Her blunt words put a ding in my pride like a front side panel of a car sideswiped from out of nowhere. Unexpected concussion like crunching metal against metal, both our wills moving in opposite directions. Trust is our insurance that disagreements will be softly pounded out to more peaceful moments. I sport this indentation temporarily until some emotional muscle is applied to mend our collision of thought. Collision insurance of devotion covers our future. We will continue to drive ahead with assurance.

"Ding"! Time's up. Lol


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Friday, September 27, 2013

Writing Exercise - Tinkling eye rolling, hanging sarcasm, etc

1. List 5 interesting adjectives
2. Find interesting noun to make a "breathtaking collision" ie: interesting metaphor
(Writing Better Lyrics - Pat Pattison)

Okay, I can do this...

1. Grating >> Feather

Her presence to him was like a grating feather to a person that hates to be tickled.

2.  Walking >> Picture frame

He gazed on the photo in the dark brown wooden border surrounding it that practically became a walking picture frame leading him by the hand down memory lane.

3. Splashing >> laughter

She bounced into the room, her vibrant sense of humor and splashing laughter turning every head and washing over every stodgy heart.

4. Tinkling >> Eye rolling

Her tinkling eye rolling sent chimes of disapproval to his sensitive, listening heart.

5. Lifted >> Wedding

The lifted wedding rose to new dazzling emotional heights as they exchanged vows in their new American language.

6.  Hanging >> Sarcasm. (Okay, so I did six)

Hanging sarcasm adorned his every un-festive word.

My first attempt at hanging/friendship turn into a verb. Try again! Still I liked what I wrote for it....

They each boarded their respective flights and left their friendship hanging like an old familiar snugly coat, knowing they could pick it up again on a moments notice.




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Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Things Hap-Pen

Wonderful morning by the pool, halfway through a 10 min. object writing exercise, my pen runs out of ink. So funny. 
Stop timer, run upstairs, get another pen, back to the pool, start timer, 5 minutes left.
"Ten minutes every day for at least six weeks. You won't believe what happens".  Hmmm...okay I'll watch my ink level.


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Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Writing Exercise: Policeman is dog, microscope, loud TV, etc

I was using "linking qualities" today. "Policeman" with; a shield, dog, microscope, loud TV, running child.

The policeman is as tough as a Roman guard deflecting the arrows of evil's law-breaking legions.

The policeman was sniffing for clues, every "a-ha" he evoked was a jubilant tail-wagging.  This canine of the law had the bite of a pit bull when it came to his hungry need to solve yet another messy case.

The policeman had the focus of a microscope, peering into the tiniest hesitations of his so-called innocent suspect.  Inquiring into the very DNA of his thoughts like a cancer researcher on the cusp of finding yet another cure.  The question-cubicle was his laboratory in this science of crime fighting.

I heard his voice behind me.  The policeman was a TV going into commercial late at night and I in a deep slumberous dream.  His tone squeezed adrenaline into my empty stomach.  I turned from my easy-chair, easy-going thoughts of a carefree day ahead to let the dog out of his desires.

The police was in hot pursuit, breaking the glass, tripping the alarm in his heart and setting him on a course of pursue-e from pursuer.  The shrill screams of the siren set him on a sadly excited course of madness.

Ed. Note:  I'm enjoying this. :)



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Tuesday, December 18, 2012

Writing Exercise - Traffic

From a writing exercise today:

"Traffic is ...My Enemy

"Traffic is my enemy as I see the red line on Google Maps leering back at me in pained defiance.  My blood boils as it presents itself to me in spite.  I thrust and parry, in and out of lanes.  Battle cries of, "What an idiot!"
Oh, how I despise traffic's daily rebellion to my perfect plans!"

~ Ever feel this way? lol
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Monday, December 10, 2012

Writing Exercises, Heated-Kernel Mouth-Stuffing

Let's sample some further fruits of my "timed, sense-bound object writing" exercises, shall we?

Rain Cloud

Where did you go rain cloud?
You were looming in all directions this gloomy morning
I see your friends through the messy myrtle branches
I hear the sneaky jet engines rumble overhead
You spoke in black over tones

Movie Theatre

"I already foresee the end of my heated-kernel mouth-stuffing binge"

From cigar to:

"Breezes of quiet patron dreamings [I think I just made up a word] seeping from the Holiday Inn window.

Sailor

"Wind slaps at my face.  The elements love me with the force of a hurricane devotion"

"Black coffee like the nighttime sea-sky."

Waitress Clearing A Table

"Her heart floods with the thankfulness of a coffee-starved college student"

"No one hears her thoughts but drinks in her smile"

Balloon Man

"Multi-colored happiness hovering on a canvas of sky-blue infinity"

First Snowfall

"[The] quiet of whispering, white manna-flakes"
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That's it for now.  Can you tell I am amusing myself?  Will this make be a better songwriter?

Time will yell, I mean, tell.
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Monday, December 3, 2012

Moving-Forward Monday

Acoustic guitars become 1's and 0's in the mysterious digital recording world!
Looking back on the last week or two...I've started two new songs this past week and I think another the week before. (I get some idea or inspiration from an artist who's song is featured on a TV show and off I go).  I've added in writing exercises as well.

On the recording end of things, started guitars and drums on one song, background vocals on another, and I'm ready to add "backgrounds" on still another.

Oh! Went to a songwriter get-together this past week and received some great feedback on a song I started TWO YEARS AGO! I knew it could still be better and I was right. The question is, do I want to continue with this one or just move on and write something new and fresh, and hopefully better with the new things I'm learning.

There's plenty to keep me busy while the band's on break.
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Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Song Craft - You Are My Hero!

Here's a peak at some writing activity from yesterday. 

I've read (and have been reading-but that's another post) that if you want to be a serious writer - a pro - as opposed to an amateur, you don't sit around and wait till inspiration magically appears.  You show up "at your desk" (even if it IS somewhere outside in the Florida panhandle in late February-I know, hate me) and you do your work!

This is one way that works for me.  Take a title idea, break down the words of it, and write word associations. A large legal pad works best.  Even if at the end of the day I've written nothing usable in lyric form (Definition: Cr*p), at least I showed up (and felt good after the fact!).

AND there was no laptop in site. It was back to basics and NO smartphone.

Okay, back to the palm trees, sunshine, a coolish-warm Gulf breeze. (sorry!)  
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Saturday, February 11, 2012

Free Valentine's Song Download!

Donut by Dunkin' Donuts
Do you "heart" getting stuff for free?

In honor of Valentine's Day I've instructed my cherub-like (but actually existing only in my mind) assistants to make available for a limited time as a Free Download my song, "Yes, Love" (Donut not included)

MUSE BEHIND THE SONG:

When I sat down at the piano to write "Yes, Love", I was purposely and directly inspired by the songwriting of Burt Bacharach and Hal David.  I love those classic songs like, "A House Is Not a Home", "This Guy's In Love", and "Say A Little Prayer".  I hope to continue writing more like this, contemporary music molds be...."darned"!
FYI: I'm playing all instruments and singing all the vocals you hear in the song.

On the upper right of this page look inside the box that says FREE DOWNLOADS.  Kindly click inside this box for the downloading process to begin.

Yes, you'll have to (not necessarily want to) trade your email address for the goods, but as always, you can grab the tune then unsubscribe!  Sort of like an email-address-back guarantee. What. A. Deal. !

(If you are already captive on my email list, good news - you are already qualified to receive your gushy musical gift.)  CLICK HERE

In conclusion, just say "yes" to "Yes, Love" :)

Hope you enjoy the tune!

~ SP
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Monday, November 28, 2011

Welcome to Re-Writing!

Okay, so this is a little about how things work sometimes.

I gave myself an hour to come with something new in a song lyric already well on it's way, then I would move on to some other musical task.  In exactly an hour and a half the last missing word-piece of the songwriting puzzle fell into place!

The song title is "Farmer's Tan".  I was working on what I call "Part A" of Verse 1.  The electronic scribblings and non-sensical notes look like this:


And this is the outcome so far:

Now hopefully, in the final draft,  the verse sets up the chorus in a strongly comprehensive way.


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Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Track Preview - "Mama Gonna Whoop You!"

Okay, as promised, here's a song preview of "Mama Gonna Whoop You" only available to those of you on my email list. (I figure you hopefully like me enough already to accept this piece of work in it's unfinished state and won't flee at the click of a mouse if you don't like it!)

It's a rough mix.  There's still things to add to it like background vocals, but I think it's still fun to hear and I wanted to share.  Once you click "play" it should ask you to confirm that you're on the email list before you're allowed to hear more than 30 seconds of it.  (Now, if 30 seconds is enough for you, then maybe I haven't done my job in hooking your ear into hearing more!!)  Hope that's not the case!



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Thursday, May 26, 2011

Taxi Forward - Urgent Entertainment News! - Sounds Like?

It's always good to get a bit of good news when you're not feeling up to snuff from the flu.

Got the results of another Taxi Music pitch of mine that was forwarded.  In short, the listing called for:

ENTERTAINMENT TELEVISION-type INSTRUMENTAL CUES a la shows similar to Access Hollywood, Entertainment Tonight, Extra, etc., needed by a Full Service Music Publishing Company with a great working relationship at a Major Network for use in multiple shows! They're looking for short cues of 60 seconds or less - think "bumpers" and transition music! They said, and we quote: "The key word often used for the music we want is 'urgent entertainment news'."


Click on the music player to hear my....creation "Celebrity D&B"



We'll see what happens"!

What is Taxi?  What is a "Forward"  Click HERE.

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Saturday, April 16, 2011

I Reflect Therefore I Am and Therefore I Shall Continue The Journey

Yours truly pondering in a meadow somewhere in Missouri.
Photo: Kevin Lovelady
I'm a very reflective guy. That's why I try not to look in the mirror too much.

Ha, ha - funny!

Seriously, I HAVE been reflective (Of the most meditative kind minus the "transendental" aspect) of late. I believe I'm on my 6th year with Hotel California A Salute To The Eagles. Goal #1 was to take part in some really cool musical situation where I didn't have to play in bars 5-nights-a-week for a buck, but where people were actually paying attention to the music. I found H-Cal. and Holy-Divine-timely-intervention! - it was a perfect match!

This gig I knew would support my songwriting "habit" (Goal #2), which consists of learning the songwriting craft, writing, and recording the best songs and instrumental tracks I could possibly write and continue improving with the passage of time.

Lo and behold, I found out how much I enjoyed performing on the big stage and how much I enjoyed learning THAT whole thing. Connecting with the audience, hitting those necessary high-notes on certain songs, playing my parts correctly (ha ha!), etc. This as well is a never-ending, though rewardingly exciting, path of continued learning.

So this is where I am. Double-edged sword, double-whammy, however you want put it. I was formerly just a guy wanting to write songs and play some cool gigs. Now I'm a guy who I think has grown to love the stage as well. From the feedback I get, wow! - I'm touched.

Putting out a CD in the future? I don't know. Not a very focused...umm,...focus... to get somewhere in the music biz. I've just reached my 50th year on this planet. Guess this late bloomer/dreamer is just re-evaluating. I'm very blessed to do what I do. In the words of California PBS Television host, Huell Howser, "The Adventure Continues"!

Thanks for reading. God bless you in your endeavours!
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Friday, March 4, 2011

Song Title Summary - Real Exciting Post Title, I Know!

With 2 hours to go till we reach are Florida destination, allow me to share some titles of song projects I'm working on all at the same time.  Most of these are in the process of being recorded.

The Interesting:

"Flirty In Flannel"
"Mama Gonna Whoop You"
"She Keeps Bees"
"A Girl and Her Dog"

I would call these titles the "Not-So-Interesting" because on first reading without hearing the songs they're just....plain, but hopefully made more interesting with the lyric and melody:

"Waiting On The Rain"
"Opened My Heart"


I think I've got Country (Blues, Contemporary), Alternative Pop, and Adult Contenporary covered here.

Honorable Mention goes to:

"Farmer's Tan" (country)
"Something Summer" (alternative pop)

I've grown partial to these two of late and they're real close to finished (of course that could mean days or even months of rewrites!)

Have any that you think I should work on?
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Friday, February 4, 2011

Update: "I'm Going To Disneyland"

You may remember my past post about a new song, "I'm Going To Disneyland".


Well, I went ahead and pitched it to a country listing, knowing there may be possible challenges with the song.  I recently got some excellent industry feedback that confirmed my misgivings.


Yes, as I suspected, it would definitely have the potential to be a "legal nightmare" for a publisher using a Disney Trademark.


Here's a quote from screener:  "You have two choices, you can recycle the music and write new lyrics or just keep it the same and use it locally and regionally. One way to recycle the music is to pitch the tracks in the instrumental listings (retro pop) for tv, movies, documentaries. Blessings on all you do!"


One reason I made it a free download was for the "locally and regionally" part.  Just leave as it is,  put it out there for others to enjoy, and keep writing other tunes.


Another clarification for me is, well, to this screener's ears, it's not country.  It's retro-pop.  I have to admit, I think my Kenny Loggins roots may have shown through on this one.


It's only one person's (educated) opinion, I know, on this song, but I think I can take some very good things away from it.
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Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Second Chance For Happy Circus Time

As you may have read here, when I'm not out playing shows, I'm writing tracks and songs for commercial placements in all sorts of different apllications through a company called Taxi.  They put out listings for needed music in many genres including the following left-of-center request:

UPBEAT, HAPPY, PEPPY CIRCUS CALLIOPE-STYLE INSTRUMENTALS needed by a global Music Publisher servicing ambient spaces (retail, malls, restaurants, theme parks). Aim for the authentic style of old world circus parades, carnivals and riverboats with playful melodic motifs and an upbeat spirit. Songs must be original or public domain covers. Imagine big pink swirls of cotton candy and carnival barkers on the midway and you're on your way. Broadcast Quality is needed (great sounding home recordings are fine).

I decided to give this one a try and came up this little ditty below.  I did what I usually do by getting on iTunes and listening to a few samples of "circus music". I didn't have a true calliope in my arsenal of sound samples so I took an organ patch and "injected" some airiness into it.  (huh?)  Tweaked it.  This is what happened:

CLICK ON MUSIC PLAYER TO HEAR "HAPPY CIRCUS TIME"


The first time I pitched it, it was returned and the critique I got back was, "This track would have been perfect for this listing.  The melody to Happy Circus Time is too close to You Are My Sunshine which is under copyright since 1938."  Oooops!

The Punch Line
And so the second chance.  The listing has been put up again for more tracks in the same genre so I get to adjust the melody a little bit and resubmit it!  I have high hopes for "Happy" the second time around since it was "perfect for this listing."

Thanks for reading along in my songwriting journey!  I'll keep you posted.
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Thursday, January 20, 2011

Vlog #5 - NEW SONG: Mama Gonna Whoop You!



Here's a rough version of a tune I've been working on.

Where did you ever get this song title, Steve?

Well,....traveling down the road on the bus this past year, our FOH (that's Front of House) sound engineer, Kevin, mentioned a line that became the title of this song.  I believe he said his Mom used to say this, "Mama Gonna Whoop You".  So I took up my personal challenge to come up with something using said childhood warning as a title or "hook" as it's called in the songwriting world.  Lyrics came first, then I added the melody later "whilst" tweaking the lyric as I went.

What's your excuse for such silliness? 

If anything, it's a songwriting exercise.  I have no idea who would sing this besides me.  The idea is to just keep writing!.  Hope you enjoy watching my singing head since when I film this I failed to have my guitar in the shot as well.  But there you have it.  I'm not going to record this againnnn!
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Friday, December 3, 2010

Attention Disney Fans: Feast Your "Ears" on a My New Song!

(Photo: Ellen Auld)
Okay, so got this idea for a song quite a while ago. Song title came first ("I'm Going To Disneyland") and I persisted to chip away at it until the finished form posted here.

I get a personal kick out of this myself , but I have my misgivings about it when we're talking marketabilty in the world of serious songwriting.

1. Trademark/legal (obvious?) issues in the hook.  And, would someone besides me want to sing this (my main goal for writing songs in the first place)?

2. I wonder too if the lyric really "works" well enough to get it placed somewhere.

Check out the photo of yours truly during some R&R (but is it really in the extreme June humidity, seriously!?) at Disney "World" as opposed to Disney"Land", the subject of our inspired song.  I think the majority of the celebratory "celeb" commercials are aimed toward Disney World.

But there ya have it.

Click on player below to hear "I'm Going To Disneyland"



What it all has come down to for me at this point is to just not think about it too hard, finish it and move on to other songs.  Just get it out there and show that yes, I may have some songwriting ability in this genre. 

I hope you enjoy it.  Should I make it a free download?  Feel free to speak your mind.  Love it, hate it, "keep your day job"?  Oh, and thanks reading all this! 

sp


Here are the lyrics for those who care to read along:


"I'm Going To Disneyland"


© 2010 Steve Probst

I'm rounding third, I'm almost home
Her smile is sayin', "Go, man, go!"
I take her hand and hold it tight
I pop the question, let it fly

Can you believe it?
I major-league it
There's never been a happier man      
Hey, I'm going to Disneyland
She's so mine, and I'm so proud
We go together
Like sunny weather 
And pictures with Mickey Mouse
I get the goofies just holdin' hands
I'm going to Disneyland

In front of friends and family
Gave that girl a diamond ring
Had us a daughter, then a son
Should be a crime having so much fun

Hey, alligator  
I'll see ya later

There's never been a happier man
Hey, I'm going to Disneyland
They're so mine, and I'm so proud
We go together
Like sunny weather 
And pictures with Mickey Mouse
I've got the goofies, I'm makin' plans
I'm going to Disneyland

SOLO

Life's so amazin'
That's why I'm sayin'

CHORUS


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Wednesday, October 20, 2010

What's Happening Wednesday - P90X, New Track, etc...

I'm on Day 3 of the infamous P90X infomercial workout to get this body movin' a little better in the everday activities of life, if you know what I mean?  The road is tough!

Me trying to get home outside Flagstaff, AZ - Photo: Kevin Lovelady
Trying to get to  a little lyric/melody work in the morns, and then get to whatever recording I need to tend to.  Yesterday I finished and pitch an Aerosmith/Kiss type of rock instrumental entitled, for lack of a better word, "Kiss This Way"

Click on player below to hear:


Other than that, shows and travel have slowed down a bit and "civilian life" is grand!

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Friday, October 15, 2010

Hey, Songwriters!: Appletell reviews MasterWriter 2.0

MasterWriter 2.0Provides: Creative writing tools and reference dictionary
Format: Download and CD
Developer: MasterWriter
Minimum System Requirements: 1.42GHz PowerPC or 2.0GHz Intel Core 2 Duo processor, Mac OS X v10.4, 512MB RAM, built-in or external microphone, QuickTime 7.5.5 or better (installer included)
Processor Compatibility: Universal
Price: $9.95/mo, $99/yr, or $199 purchase
Availability: Now
Version Reviewed: 2.0

A good friend of mine from high school—a gentleman and a poet—once told me that when writing lyrics he always tosses out the first rhyme that comes to mind. Too obvious. I’m not sure if he developed that rule on his own or if he borrowed it from someone else, but it seems like good advice to me. I can think of a lot of songwriters who really need to take that approach (I’m looking at you, Paul Stanley).

Trouble is, of course, that the second option isn’t always there. You’ve got “love” on the page, so now what? “Shove” again? “Glove?”

This is where a program such as MasterWriter can prove helpful. It’s just a database, really, but it’s a database full of rhymes, phrases, parts of speech, word families, pop culture references and plenty of more, all of which place that perfect word or phrase right at your fingertips.

There’s a version of MasterWriter 2 aimed specifically at poets and songwriters. I’m not reviewing that version, but if that’s your outlet, you can learn more about it here. I will be looking at MasterWriter 2.0 for creative writers.

First, the toolset. MasterWriter 2.0 is broken into:

  • Word Families - reference dictionary
  • Parts of Speech - descriptive words with numerous filters
  • Phrases - 33,000 phrases, sayings, idioms and word combinations
  • Rhymes - over 100,000 rhymes and close rhymes
  • Pop-Culture - 11,000 icons of American and world culture
  • Dictionary - Merriam-Webster—165,000 entries with 225,000 definitions
  • Thesaurus - Merriam-Webster—over 340,000 synonyms, antonyms, idioms and more

Each of these tools works basically the same way. In Word Families, for instance, you can search for “angry.” Characters are often angry in stories, after all, but how angry? Well, search for angry, then select your part of speech. I chose adjective, and was presented with 44 options. “Bristly,” for example, but that looks kind of wimpy on the page. “Hot-under-the-collar?” Perhaps a few generations ago. “Incensed?” Better. “Wrathful?” Now, we’re getting somewhere. “Ireful?” “Livid?”

MasterWriter 2.0

These are good words. Much better than “angry,” but you can only go with one. You won’t need to search for “angry” again to remember these options, though. You can double click the ones you like to add them to your favorites. Then, you can call them back up with the click of a button.

You can also play with filters to see more/fewer options, or target specific uses and degrees of intensity.

Now, click on Phrases, and you get a list of popular phrases that use the word “angry.” That angry character can express it in ways people do in real life (like it or not, most of use tend to speak in clichés from time to time). I found this helpful in other ways, as well. For instance, is the phrase “six ways to Sunday,” “six ways til Sunday” or “six ways from Sunday?” Searching for “sunday” and clicking Phrases, MasterWriter tells me it’s to. I’ll trust them.

MasterWriter 2.0

What would be really helpful here, however, is a history of the phrase. The dictionary gives you the basic origins, but knowing how a word was used when would be very helpful with historical fiction. That would pretty much require a whole new database to be worthwhile, however.

The Rhymes feature is pretty powerful here despite the program’s songwriter/poet counterpart. “Sunday” gave me ten pages of rhymes. I could narrow these down by primary (May), secondary (jetway) and pop culture (James Earl Ray), and even search for rhyming phrases (you can’t drink your cares away). There are 29 pages in this result, 39 if I search for wider sound-alikes, decidedly less if I narrow it down by syllables. Have to worry about meter, after all.

MasterWriter 2.0

Pop-Culture proves to be one of the more surprisingly powerful tools available, mainly because of its integration with Wikipedia. You can search for popular references in numerous categories, then pick a name. Say, comedians, then Steve Martin. Click on his name, and it appears in the Wikipedia search bar. Click Go, and you’re at his Wikipedia entry without leaving MasterWriter.

And that presents me with my only real complaint about MasterWriter 2 (well, aside from the dated and somewhat clumsy PC-like user interface); pretty much every tool presented here is available through something called the Internet. The difference is that you get access to everything in one tight package with MasterWriter 2.0, including the ability to keep your results well-organized and easily retrievable. You can even write your stories within MasterWriter 2.0, but it’s not nearly as friendly or powerful for that as Storyist or Storymill.

What I don’t know, then, is whether it’s worth the heavy pricing schemes, especially if it’s only a reference tool for you. I’m always put-off by software subscriptions as you can get with MasterWriter’s monthly and yearly plans. There’s an outright purchase option, but it includes no upgrades; you’d have to go two years without upgrading in order for that to pay off versus the yearly license fee.

So, it’s expensive. But it’s also convenient and powerful (there are many features I didn’t have time to cover here), and you could likely make that money back in time saved, depending upon how serious you are about finding the perfect word, phrase or reference. The aforementioned Paul Stanley doesn’t need MasterWriter 2.0. He’s more than happy to rhyme “rough” with “tough.” Steve Martin likely doesn’t need it, either. He’s happy to rhyme “pointy” with “annointy.” I need it, though. I’m likely to use it six ways to Sunday.

You, in the meantime, can check out the trial version.

Appletell Rating:
MasterWriter 2.0 review

Buy MasterWriter 2.0

A highly recommend songwriting software used by yours truly! :)


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